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Brother I Am Coming Pt. 2

  • Writer: David Raskin
    David Raskin
  • Jan 6, 2024
  • 2 min read

Coming Acrostic

Stadium Scene Before March

March Acrostic


Coming into the stadium

On the kicks, wings, feathers, of strides against heaven-unkown-hade's bin

My family stood there as some people waiting to say "yinz"

I know I was inside my head rating the invisible spins

Now all I had to do was cater to my gifted invited, I got knighted, pin

Golly how it was back in the day, of our new VINS,


I put my pin on I had in my pocket

This guys limbs the urge of this new race walk jock hit.

For I knew We were ready to walk it.


So as a former Davey Crocket,

I just went up next to the awareness team

I guess you can say that It seemed like their bare wits

were on the verge of a gleam.


But It was in the Middle of The Stadium behind the steel Tower

It was thee kind deals hour.

Nature the divine no longer had me feel like a coward.


We were the one's I guess you could say "up and fired" who were about to march

and It was gaia the one who had ourselves destined to be parched.

Something in the air onto me threw darts

But with care we knew it was time to start.

Our souls lay bare and we all put our hands over our hearts.

Once as one family "We the heir Cells of the deceased keys"

Just for Once, One moment in time we couldn't part.

And it was time to use our wings, our strides, our gaits, our date,

our shoes, our knees


Meeting again we did with a track

An always alone guy like me for just once was no longer familial challenged wack

Rax the former employer of myself, put on a few pounds for this crazy jack

Coming to the middle, our conversation wasn't small or little, plenty of talk was something we didn't lack.

How the track was made of rubber


How the track stood for brother.


May was the weather sign

Away from sadness we could commit no crimes

Ready We were to conquer, the rest of the meet for sir

Credible, was our sincerity in the place we were.

Heaven bound "already inside" we knew our dear friend was running with his best friend who once purred.


1/6/24

6:02am

-RaskinBlog

-AvalonDakota

 
 
 

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