Neatnik
- David Raskin

- May 27
- 2 min read
His home now was clean, he had an im beat wit.
Alone and now free, on the web, he also was a glad neatnik. he was the best man
insured now via strong ghost as "complete from risks"
His dome said wow to the blog post of "ill treat your kits" if they're defective
His site raring to be stern and free and "partner's turn now card lead"
then took flight, had the well deserved money not burned smart key,
It was bright, it was bartered with a new make it right return smart policy
it was awarding-complete, for the wooden greets
it had seeds, for the diy meets
it had guarantee fights the learned ways of his fun online classes, which he aced with fast trackedness
it was during that week, during rook ben sleep
deep from the barren sea sights of red heat, on a certain martian night-day
the divine with control signs
parked on top of the young fine bastion, rich with grace
and rich with laxness
strong with a surge from their delivery curve
was their "olympus mons nerved thing"
(it was their purge, their gift emerged)
their gift lift, their news delivery person shift, with him on his list, had the earthian newspaper throw
that landed he was finally atlast-atlas fit.
he looked towards the moon's slight glow, as the loomed bro
it was time for the show! he had room to grow and was sandman unsanded, and full of thrift
strong now with an urge with a free gifted "wrong earth link"
he now had a calm
Com Mirth Wink
Dawn gave birth he was on the brink
No longer with sitting leads as "Mr. Thing" "Carpenter the hard curmudgeon"
his martian brow epiphany did sing and was all of a "not from earth" sudden
and now his hinged wooden cards are worth hundreds
- Avalon Dakota
- 5-27-25
- 11:50pm
- Neatnik











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