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  • Writer: David Raskin
    David Raskin
  • Oct 27, 2024
  • 2 min read

On The Off day it was, I was no longer sleeping, teasing me, the dream was a reality bust, I was no longer with mental health or still fainting fatigue rust, and with money to combust

I made the order on the app rush and had the items delivered

 

Right on point; Up and Eve! It was there on the porch in time which was just-just

Along with my new $5 slippers for “I the putz”, I really did put the service inside my good trust.

I gave the extra tip button a tap so robust. We were winners

 

Dumb Dumb Goof Scoots like me, far removed from paper cuts, with the speed service-order of the plus with the get it now tide of “express is a must”, “pay for it more it’s the best with lust” “may my excuse now be how I’ll make it just”

Couldn’t have obtained my quick goods and split up the front stairs any quicker my wallet was thinner

 

Even people like me, Read compilation books from poets of the past

12 poems about nature, and I were about to have a blast

 

Ready and Eager, I was for two of them before the chores, and again the buzzer, the cuckoo clock above my pen sabre’s door,

hit me like Lenore. It was time for the pine sol, against the “dom of bore”, to pour.

 

I was the sanitation engineer and my floors were no longer in a child’s state of hurt

 

I logged onto the privately owned fan website which memorialized his work

 

-        Avalon Dakota

-        10/27/24

-        11:44am

 

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