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Park Sunset 2

  • Writer: David Raskin
    David Raskin
  • Aug 27
  • 1 min read

I had a plateful Oreo Sunset, the grateful glory of my set of the fly Jets, stood in front of the touring slow quest, of the proud red clouds rolling by, I was out loud taking and tolling five on the Ancient Hill

 

my patience spilled, onto my show biz pouring hits screen for her Poet Laureate roughish een 

 

for the sake so glad of X until, I was and had forty minutes left for the thrill

 

next on the bill of the hearings of Ted Talks

 

was the highest ranking youth poet bound to across the stage walk

 

I just knew the skill of her was raring to be red hot

 

I just waited for her tasks in front of my picnic scene

 

and the treated grass on the hill was neatnik green 

 

the traits of her class was going to be the will of having an unshortstick dream

 

I was the big brother taking in her art showing so fine and was the best supporter

 

And the overall park with myself as the park lover had closing time sunset order

 

Myself being the soon to be at rest boarder, walked right home with faithful fateful care

 

Again on Ted’s block I said Shalom, it was finally time for the dateful grateful premiere

 

- Avalon Dakota

- 8-27-25

- 6:10pm

- Park Sunset 2


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